Every moment that passes by,
Holds your picture in my eyes..
The thought of you does not go away,
I love you, in my heart you stay…
O! my love , it was an Utopian life,
Free from discontentment and strife..
I still feel the soothing sight of your smile,
Feeling lost in paradise for a while..
I wonder, how you made me a child,
Brought out the mischief,let me go wild..
I had transcended many worlds with you,
Holding your hand, being replete with you..
Now it is me, and I am still standing by,
You are gone, have become an angel in the sky..
I know my sorrow still makes you cry,
It's still raining,your tears haven't gone dry..
I shall be happy,not let my promise break,
Find happiness, another bond I shall make..
But the inside of me shall never be replete,
Without you, my life's portrait shall never be complete..
17 comments:
Beautifully expressed sentiments.May the new bond to come by last forever once made,and may the portrait be filled with the richness of love's colors :)
@sameera .. thnx
O! my love , it was an Utopian life,
Free from discontentment and strife..
my fav lines from the whole piece..
amazing expression..
:)
"Every moment that passes by,
Holds your picture in my eyes:
loved them the most:)
beautiful lines
@ shruti..
thnx .. yes they say utopia is a myth but i feel \ have felt .. love makes ur life utopian
@inner world
thanks...
love is important
Or may I say THE important thing in life..
very nice post..
MIP
Sweet...
heya u hav written and expressed feelings very beautifully
luved to read this post
@MIP
thanks welcome here
@Kartz..
thanks
@Priya Joyce
thnx .. welcome here
@anonymous..
Well that pretty much sums up my own analysis of my writings .. so thanks .. :)
a very nice feeling!I liked all the undercurrents of the poem!
@anwesa .. thnx .. and welcome here
Hi Siddarth,
My 1st visit here. Your feeling of love is quite infectious. I wish you the best in the quest for a new love.
Liked the lines:
"I wonder, how you made me a child,
Brought out the mischief,let me go wild..
I had transcended many worlds with you,
Holding your hand, being replete with you.."
Love is indeed a blissful feeling !! :). Well written emotive lines.
I would appreciate if you could share your views on my blog.
Love to All
Prashant
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@prashant ..
thanx..
sure i wud lov to
And your love is for eternity thine ..exquisite ...
blogrolling you
@ think tank ...
thanks .. its an honour :)
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