Thursday, August 21, 2008

you complete me

Every moment that passes by,
Holds your picture in my eyes..
The thought of you does not go away,
I love you, in my heart you stay…

O! my love , it was an Utopian life,
Free from discontentment and strife..
I still feel the soothing sight of your smile,
Feeling lost in paradise for a while..

I wonder, how you made me a child,
Brought out the mischief,let me go wild..
I had transcended many worlds with you,
Holding your hand, being replete with you..

Now it is me, and I am still standing by,
You are gone, have become an angel in the sky..
I know my sorrow still makes you cry,
It's still raining,your tears haven't gone dry..

I shall be happy,not let my promise break,
Find happiness, another bond I shall make..
But the inside of me shall never be replete,
Without you, my life's portrait shall never be complete..

18 comments:

*~*{Sameera}*~* said...

Beautifully expressed sentiments.May the new bond to come by last forever once made,and may the portrait be filled with the richness of love's colors :)

descrying the shadows said...

@sameera .. thnx

Shruti said...

O! my love , it was an Utopian life,
Free from discontentment and strife..

my fav lines from the whole piece..
amazing expression..
:)

my inner world said...

"Every moment that passes by,
Holds your picture in my eyes:

loved them the most:)

beautiful lines

descrying the shadows said...

@ shruti..
thnx .. yes they say utopia is a myth but i feel \ have felt .. love makes ur life utopian

descrying the shadows said...

@inner world
thanks...

MAN IN PAINTING said...

love is important
Or may I say THE important thing in life..
very nice post..

MIP

Kartz said...

Sweet...

Priya Joyce said...

heya u hav written and expressed feelings very beautifully
luved to read this post

descrying the shadows said...

@MIP
thanks welcome here
@Kartz..
thanks
@Priya Joyce
thnx .. welcome here

Anonymous said...

you suck.

descrying the shadows said...

@anonymous..
Well that pretty much sums up my own analysis of my writings .. so thanks .. :)

ANWESA said...

a very nice feeling!I liked all the undercurrents of the poem!

descrying the shadows said...

@anwesa .. thnx .. and welcome here

Prashant Sree said...

Hi Siddarth,

My 1st visit here. Your feeling of love is quite infectious. I wish you the best in the quest for a new love.

Liked the lines:
"I wonder, how you made me a child,
Brought out the mischief,let me go wild..
I had transcended many worlds with you,
Holding your hand, being replete with you.."

Love is indeed a blissful feeling !! :). Well written emotive lines.

I would appreciate if you could share your views on my blog.

Love to All

Prashant
*+

descrying the shadows said...

@prashant ..
thanx..
sure i wud lov to

Think Tank said...

And your love is for eternity thine ..exquisite ...

blogrolling you

descrying the shadows said...

@ think tank ...
thanks .. its an honour :)