Monday, July 28, 2008

Proposing out of boredom

That's it!!! I am bored.So i decide to do what I think I do best.Come up with cheesy lines.For the reader: "Please proceed at your own risk !! No derogatory comments will be entertained".
THREE different proposals...!
1)The cliched one: "When I look at you and the person that you are, I always realise that you are meant to be the "One" for me. You make my life perfect and I intend to be the same and do the same for you all your life.Darling,will you marry me ?"
Ok. .. I know that's very very very mundane and stereotyped.I will try to come up with something better and a little original.
2)On my knees holding the hand of the girl very softly and looking up to her,in front of tons of acquaintances of course - " Over the course of our friendship and relationship, I have messed up stuff many times and I don't even have a count of how many times you let it go and still stood by me to keep what is between us going.I don't promise you that I wont mess up anymore,not because I don't want to stop messing but because I can't make a promise I am not sure I can keep.I promise though that I will try and try sincerely.Often you have helped me face what ever difficulty came in my path and you have acted like the "Man" in my life.I could go on and on for why I need you in my life and would not have one word to say about why you would need me.No not because,I cannot give you many things, I can, but because I will give you everything and try giving you more than that.Why ? because I love myself for the fact that someone like you loves me and I would never want to hate myself. I know I am not perfect for you,nor do i believe that you are perfect for me,but I know after a life spent together, the world will say we were perfect for each other.Will you spend your whole life with me ? "
Hmmm.. ok.. that lacked a punch and t lost its intensity..I dont think I would opt for something like this while proposing.
Let me give it one last shot...
3) "You know there have been times in the past when I have been desolate, and scarred.I fought through those times to reach a place in life where I had eliminated many people from my life and found a new friend in lonliness..I had found my own self.From then on I have made many friends and my life has turned towards a beautiful road and the ride has been smooth and will god willing stay smooth.But all along I still retained that entity as I found him to be the best companion I could ask for.A person who knew every single shred of me,who understood everything about and with in me..I loved him,I loved myself and I was happy.Then I met you.You don't understand me as well as he does,nor do you know me as well as he does,but still for a reason I don't know I want you to replace "HIM".I want to come to you instead of him,when I am in that place again.I want to choose you over him for help,when I am in need of something.I want to trust you more than I would ever trust him.I want you to be the one who replaces me for him and him for me.I want you to be the reason behind my every smile,success and endeavour.I want you to be my real reeason for living this life.I love you and i cant live without loving you and every single thing in you.Mishti,You are the reason I want to feel my heart again...will you take my life for your eternity and make it worth being called one ?"
Okay i screwed it up .. I guess i can't do even this when i am bored..jeez...!


*~*{Sameera}*~* said...

I don't think you screwed it up!

They were all sweet,especially the last one :)

descrying the shadows said...

@ sameera..
chee thnx .. I guess i will try it out on someone then ;)

Kartz said...

:D I was laughing at that... Yeah, u better try it out. The ladies will be better at rating them. As for myself, I prefer the classical style. :) And how about this?

"I hereby curse you for giving me all those sleepless nights! You will have a daughter who will go head over heels for my son and when that happens I... I.. I..... Darling, let's just make them brother and sister, shall we?" ;)

descrying the shadows said...

@kartz .. well if anyone fell for that .. you wud be the unluckiest guy in this dimension

Kartz said...

Heh heh heh... At least, it was 'different' in its own right! ;) Lets c who tries it out...

rantravereflect/ jane said...

here's mine..

"can we move our cheese together form now on??"